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From what i was told the assignment was sense i wasnt able to make it to class wensday i went through my paper i wrote and looked at each of the sentences that started off my paragraphs and i noticed that even though they let you understand what the up coming paragraph was going to be about and they helped answer the main question at the end of the paper i believe I could have spiced them up because they were very repedative and started to bore me. To do this i could have used quotes to grab the readers attention or i could have worded them differently so it didnt sound like i was mono-tone and boring.