First Sentance

After reading my first sentences of each paragraph I have determined that I could not make out what my paper was really about if I combined them. I think the reason for this is the fact that I did not have very much description in my first sentences and I was way too informational and limited to whom my audience could be and who would actually understand or be interested in actually reading this paper. I think for future papers that I right I am going to start off my first sentence of my paper with my thesis statement and then my first sentences of my paragraphs after that not be about what I read but about what was in the readings and what I was hoping to find in those readings.