weekly blog

Today in class i got to edit a paper. He had a few sentences that needed to be fixed in order to make the paper flow more easily. Other than that, his paper was well put together. He had numerous quotes out of the course reader and explained those quotes well after putting it in. By doing this the reader was more able to understand the quotes. If he fixes up the spots that tripped me up while i was reading the paper, he should be good to go!