weekly blog

Today at my meeting I learned that all my topic sentences needed work. They weren't bad but by adding more detail to them, they could improve. I give a vague idea of what I'm going to talk about in the paragraph which leaves the reader to guess what I am going to talk about. When I add more detail, the reader will know exactly what I'm going to talk about and thus have a better understanding of my paper. Today's meeting will help me with my final portfolio.