weekly blog

Reviewing my topic sentences for my reflective essay turned out to be a success. I noticed that most of my topic sentences started out the same way and were plain and simple. By doing this, I changed them and now there is a variety of different topic sentences to keep the readers attention and to explain what I'm going to talk about in the paragraph. The same thing went for my interpretive essay. I started every paragraph the same exact way and it didn't add to the flow of the paper. Lucky for me they were only the first of many drafts to come.