My worst date

For my second interpretive essay, I chose to use my essay about my worst date ever. After reading through my essay, I realized that throughout my writing I only retold the story of my date. My revisions to my essay consisted of telling what made the date bad and also I explained how I let things that happened that were out of my control judge whether the date was bad or not. With these revisions made, I was surprised to have added over two pages of writing to my essay. The revisions I made to my essay have added some confidence to passing portfolio.