Today I worked on my reflective essay. I like this essay the best out of all three. I feel that I need to also make stronger connections between my main topic of how conflict expand the possibilities of ideas to the body paragraphs. I also looked at each topic sentence and made them stronger - taking a closer look at the topic sentences helped me to have a clearer understanding of the main topic and I was able to convey a deeper thought throughout the paragraph. I still have more work to do but am happy with what I have at this point.
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