When writting a paper, your topic sentence says a lot. After writting the first sentence in each paragraph of my paper out. I could tell cearly what the general idea of the paper to follow would be about. They all relate in the sense of theyre talking about memory. I did notice that I did have a few run on sentences. Another thing i could work on for my paragraph topic sentences would be to better transission them, because even though I know what the paper will be about so it makes sense to me, the reader of the paper may not. However over all i think my sentences were fairly good.