first sentences

After reviewing all of my topic sentences on a different sheet of paper, I realized they all need a lot of work. First of all, I start three of the topic sentences in the same way by saying what the title of the article I read was. I could have started the paragraphs with a quote or something different to make my paper more interesting. In other words, I directly stated what I was going to talk about from paragraph to paragraph. Also, my topic sentences don’t relate too much to the question I’m trying to answer. By making them go with the question will further help me answer the question in as much detail as possible. All in all, I need to work on making my topic sentences go back to my thesis and having different structures for each topic sentence to avoid repetition.